阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。With the de...

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One possible version:
Shopping on the Internet
The passage talks about the advantages and disadvantages of shopping on the Internet. Though it has some weaknesses, it is becoming more and more popular.
I think the strongest point of shopping on the Internet is the convenience. We don’t have to search from shops to shops to look for the things we want, which saves a lot of time and energy. Some of my friends enjoy it very much and often buy some books, CDs and clothes on the Internet. I haven’t done much shopping on the Internet. The only thing I have bought on the Internet is a beautiful backpack, which I really like and it cost me 25 yuan.
However, we must be careful not to be cheated when shopping on the Internet. First, we should read the ads very carefully. Secondly, don’t believe everything they say in the advertisements and try to compare the prices more. What’s more important, we’d better choose those famous companies.

试题分析：本文的关键在于审题，首先要描述文章的要点，即网络购物的优势和劣势。以及写作网络购物的越来越受欢迎的趋势。实际上本文属于议论文，要阐述你所认为的网络购物的最大的优势—便利，便宜。同时也要客观地描述网络购物的劣势—安全性不高。再细致地描述你自己的一次网购的体验，同时提出自己的网络购物的建议要仔细甄别。
点评：审题时一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。